Reviewed by: Celestial fire
Go to Revolutionary Reviews

Splash:
This page looks sort of cluttered to me. I'd move that stuff into a section on the main site, unless you really want it there. Also, I don't know what B/A is, I just might be ignorant but I've never seen it before.

Layout: The main picture is huge. Size it down a little bit, It takes a long time to load on my poor 56k, since it's the size of my whole screen. Jsut...blah. It's a nice picture, just too big. Now, I'm wondering why your iframe and navigation table go soo far down. You have at least a screen or two worth of blank space that you should take out. Just cut the size down to a little bit past your campaign site image. Speaking of which, you should take out 'my sites' and make it into a separate page. When you do that, have a short describtion for each site.

Navigation:
I must say I don't like the navigation. It's nice just waaaay too long. Try using just the pictures, have them go to a page that has the rest of the content that's listed under it. You have the three things that were listed under the splash page (nominated,member, affilates) If you're going to have it on one page, don't have it on the other. I suggest leaving it on this page.

Content: I'm going to comment on as many pages as I can.

Site Map: Nice layout. Buffy/Angel's arrow goes down a line. It's like -- (jumps down) >. And quick only has one -.

Updates: Don't put ... after every update. It looks tacky.

Nominated: I don't get 'For Reviews'. You were nominated by reviews? If you want people to read reviews you've gotten, maybe have a link that goes to that review, or have the reviews up on your site.

Affiliates: Maybe you should put up some rules about becoming an affiliate, or what you want when someone e-mails you.

The relationship: I just looked at the first event. When you have paragraph separations during dialogue, does that mean it's a different time in the episode? Maybe you should also put up episode number. Having the [x] on the right side of each event is kind of ..pointless. What is this season 1/4, 2/5 and 3/6? I don't watch Buffy so that could be it. If it's just something you're doing, explain it.

(Comment from me: 1/4 means that It's season 4 Buffy and season 1 Angel - the spin-off)

Song Lyrics: You should put who sings the song and who wrote it, so if anyone wants to download it they can.

Claddagh ring: Hmm I think that maybe you should have a zoom in of the ring, rather than just the hand.

Shipper school: Ahh stupid me figured out what B/A means. Underline the words following a), b), ect.

Episodes: You should just have the slayers rating system either on one page or on the front page of the episode guide.

Movies: Why don't you have the Buffy movie from the early 90s (I think)? That's what started the series, so it's pretty important.

(Comment from me: Didn't you read the top of the list? Not only do I have the Buffy movie, but I reviewed and rated it. It's linked there!)

Situation: You have some spelling and grammer errors.

Links: I'm not sure if links belong here, but I suppose it's the best place with your layout.

FanFic: Before going into a NC-17 section you should have a pop-up that says something like "You're about to enter a NC-17 story which may contain violence, language, ect. Are you sure? 'Okay' 'cancel'" Just to be safe.

Images: Ahh I'm not going through everyone of these with my 56k I'll just pick Sarah's. 50 a page is good, maybe put a border around the ones you added on the update.

FanArt: Pencil is spelled wrong.

Wallpapers: Gak take the border off.

Screen saver: Mayeb have a screen capture of a few oh the images, or one.

Treats: Please, can we stop the '...'

My quizes: Quizzes has two z's doesn't it? You might be right but I don't know.

Win my award: Sacrifise is supposed to be spelled sacrifice. I think you should have a award or two for non-buffy sites.

Cellphones: Grading system on how much it sounds like the song would be nice.

Christmas: This is nice, but why have it up when it's not Christmas? Also, maybe a new one every year? I don't know if you've done that or not.

Disclaimer: I'm finding it hard to believe that you took every picture on this page. You should put up which screen capture you did that with because I'm just not believing it.

(Comment from me: I scanned everything in my galleries myself. Maybe it's hard to believe, but it's the truth. And what do you mean with screen-capture? You press [alt] & [printscreen] and you've got yourself a screencap...)

Buttons: 88x31 is the standard size, so maybe have a couple of those.

Layouts: You should have your current one on a separate page. Then have it start either on the current layout page, or the first layout page. And getting far into tihs site, I still don't know what IWRY means, you should have a list of abbreviations for Buffy related things for people who watch the show but are new to the internet Buffy community.

Tutorials: Have a rating system of how good the programs are, other htan just saying it sucks (IE bravenet guestbook).

Inventory: Bold the top of the list, the name of whatever it is that you have (IE Comics).

A Fan's Heaven: Your images took a really long time to load, I didn't even wait for all of them. I opened up totalroom4 and it loaded into a redX. I don't know if that's just my computer or what. Check into it.

My Fanfics: You spelled Psycho wrong under Bad girls.

Autographs: Address has two d's.

Won: Instead of just won put Awards Won.

Other: You need a credits page. Back buttons would be good, so get a javascript one. This is the code: < a href="javascript:history.go(-1)>

What you need to do is change your navigation. It's not fun to have to scroll down to get to the bottom then scroll back up to look at it. It was a pain. Some pages have table borders, some don't. Either have them all have it or none at all. This was not a bad site at all, just some flaw that could be fixed. You definately have enough content to keep the user around (took me almost two hours). Keep up the work.

Verdict: [pink star]
Meaning:
//You've got things going that are far above the common geocities site, and it's looking like your site is starting to be decent but there are some flaws, or design problems.
Suggestion: Pay more attention to how you design, how you code, and how you arrange your layout.